Bachelor Weekend Ahoy!

Bachelor Weekend Writing

So I’m a bit late with declaring bachelor weekend, but hey…

Rikke was off home to her mom friday, and I’ve been secured in front of the computer ever since, going out only to stock up on Coke and… ehm, well just Coke actually.

Now I had actually planned to spend this bachelor weekend writing, but somehow I got sucked into K2 instead and I ended up not only moving the entire project to Google Code Hosting, but also fixing some bugs and adding some new features and—who would’ve thought—even working on the documentation wiki. It’s looking very solid at the moment. There are a few quirks here and there, but a new proper release is on its way soon. Very soon.

Anyway, about that writing. As I’ve mentioned before, I’ve been taking a dramaturgi class in relation to work, and it’s positively enlighting and inspirational. At the same time I’ve read most of Robert McKee’s Story and what better way to get some experience than to put these new skills (or wannahave skills) to the test by actually creating and working on a project?

So I’ve dived in and started laying out what is basically a film. That is, I’m thinking of it as being a film and I’m writing it in script format. It is of course a science fiction film, in case you were wondering, and it will most certainly turn out to be absolute crap. But practice makes perfect and all that.

The most interesting observation thus far has been just how much procrastination I can do before I finally settle down and work on it. The second-most interesting observation is how gripping it is to get lost in your own little fictional world, regardless of how banal or meaningless it might be. And since you were wondering, the third most interesting thing, which probably turns out to be the most useful, is how I’ve learned a new way of approaching the concept of writing a piece of fiction.

I mean let’s face it, I’ve wanted to write the next Star Wars since I was a kid; who hasn’t? And sure, I’ve had the idea many times over, and fueled by the drive to just write the shit out of that sucker, I’ve sat down at the computer/paper and… nothing.

Well, it turns out the trick is: index cards.

Yep, index cards, like the ones the libraries used to have back in the day (and still have most places, hidden away). I went out and bought about a hundred or so of them as well as a nice leather box to hold them as well as a new eraser and stick-on tabs for indexing the ehm… index cards.

And this is probably old hat to some of you, but I’ll be damned if I ever learned this in school. For writing a screenplay, which is of course at its smallest component divided into scenes, you then write the outline of a scene on a card. Where it begins, where it ends and what the turning point is, as well as any notes that might go along with it. But keep it simple.

You of course need an idea of where you want to go with each scene and in turn each sequence, and one by one you lay out the scenes so they align to each other and click with each other as needed. And because index cards are cheap and you haven’t expended a lot of energy writing the scene in detail (why would you?), you can shove them to the back of the box if you decide against a particular scene. Brilliant!

Yes, you could do it digitally, but personally I like the analog feel of actually having the components of the story between my fingers, being able to move it around on the tabletop.

Then, when you’re done for the day, pack the deck of scenes, in order mind you, into the storybox and pick it up again at some later time…

Which is where I’m at now, after having spent the last 12 hours saying “I’ll write in just a sec, I just need to do this thing with K2 first…”.

I’m now officially tired and spent. But I am nonetheless determined to get some work done on my story before my brain turns in for the night, damn the torpedoes!

8 Responses to “Bachelor Weekend Ahoy!”


  1. 1 James P

    Ahh, the power of index cards. My entire exam revision consisted of writing notes of revision cards. For some reason I just find them so easy to do and get something out of.

    I’m glad you too are enjoying the benefits of the often overlooked index card

  2. 2 Steven Rasnick

    Best of luck with your writing.

    I do the exact same way with my drawing. I’d love to sketch something everyday, but I always seem to find something else to do (usually having something to do with the internet.)

  3. 3 Trevor

    A writer friend of mine told me about the power of index cards. He said you can really build a story just posting them on your wall and visualizing the story as a whole. You can then break into smaller areas to work on without getting freaked out about the scope.

    Good luck. I’m gonna go look at K2 now. Open-sourcing themes is just crazy enough to work extremely well.

  4. 4 Pud

    You always look so organised!

  5. 5 Thomas M. Crawford

    Hello Michael.
    I just wanted to say that for science fiction it might be best not to have any influences of other scifi movies. Otherwise it will just come off as another Star Wars / Star Treck fanfilm. I’d start by figuring out a totally ‘normal’ story which in theory could take place here and now and then move it into space. This way you won’t get distracted by all the cool gadgets and locations you can invent.

  6. 6 Michael

    That’s certainly true Thomas. But who said anything about space?

  7. 7 Alex Foley

    On your note of using index cards, I myself have recently begun the hunt for an Underwood typewriter to start typing my papers for university. I can’t focus at all while on the computer (at least on my IBM here – Khoi Vinh’s Blockwriter won’t work for me), and something about sitting back without distraction only on the typewriter appeals to me.

  8. 8 Bob Nybe

    Hi,
    I’ve gone through the process of putting together (and taking apart) quite a few screenplays myself. It’s quite a fun (mostly tedious) process. Anyway I wanted to share this screenplay outline template with you.

    http://www.projectbob.com/screenplay_outline.doc

    I hope you find it usefull.

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